Tips and/or redline requested Pokemon illustration

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Hi guys! I'm almost graduating and everyone has to create a square page for the annual yearbook as a way to say ‘Goodbye’ and what you dream of in the future. I really wanted to do something with Pokémon, my favorite fandom. I sketched myself as a trainer with five of my favorite Pokémon and Pelipper (of which four are part of my team) with the Orange Islands (yet to sketch) in the background, walking uphill (because the future is only getting harder and you have to give your everything). Lugia is also flying there as a nod, because he’s my favorite Pokémon. Me as a Pokémon trainer is pointing ahead, like she’s saying “Future, here we come!”. The text is saying “I wanna be the very best” because you know, Pokémon, and I want to become one of the best illustrators XD The look of the text will be changed eventually, I want to pay attention to the illustration first.

So now I have tis sketch, I think it looks nice but not “WOW”. My whole school is going to see it so there’s a lot of pressure (if you ask me) and I like to show my best. But is this my best? :c

Here it is: I wanna be the very BEST If there’s nothing to criticize that’s fine, if there is I’ll like to know. Things like composition, facial expressions, the background, anatomy and such. Not Pokémon choice or something XD You may add notes (yess please!) or redlines, whatever you prefer.

If it’s done (it has to be by next Tuesday) I’ll show you the final result if you like c:

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Phlar1245's avatar
So, how did it go? Done on time?