Cutie mark: a red pencil drawing fire. Her talent is art and creativity, the fire stands for her passion for both drawing and fire itself.
Personality: an odd pony with an enormous fantasy and a big love for drawing. Possesses a strange sense of humor only a few ponies get. Hyperactive at times. Not very social, however fun to be around, IF she likes you, though she prefers to be alone mostly. Doesn't trust fast, has been hurt a lot before. Very sensitive and insecure about herself. Tries her best to impress others and be liked.
Facts:
- slightly bigger then regular ponies
- her father is an earth pony, she inherited his strength and size. She prefers earth ponies above other races, although it doesn't matter that much to her
- a bit chubby
- loves delicious food
- her magic is red-orange-yellow colored and doesn't sparkle, it moves like fire and is warm to the touch
So yeah, you've made a ponysona, and I'm now going to try to find something to complain about. Because if I don't have anything to point out, then this will simply be a bunch of text saying how amazing it is.
VISION - I like the entire idea. Showing the pony, the cutie mark, and as an added bonus, you've also thrown in the style of the magic, something which is really great when the pony has a custom kind of visual magic. All of it, displayed beautifully. I also like the addition of her name on top, and her nickname too, which I personally just simply love. It also fits.
[4,5 Stars]
ORIGINALITY - All I can poke on here, is the fact that the cutie mark has fire in it. I'm not sure, but that's the only thing I can see that MAY be a little unoriginal. Her name however, is lovable and neat, and her visual magic style is simply gorgeous. The pony itself is beyond... pretty much any ponysona I've ever seen before. In short: ITS GOT LOOKS, FEATURES, DETAILS, AND BACKSTORY AND IT'S SO FUCKING GOOD IT SUCKS. The entire pony is original, with its mane twirling around the horn, small and neat details, practically addicting eyes, great and compelling personality, gorgeous mane, tail, and great colours.
[5 Stars] (God dammit you deserve it)
TECHNIQUE - ... >_> <_< ...What? THERE'S NOTHING TO CRITICISE ABOUT THE TECHNIQUE.
IT LOOKS AMAZING, WONDERFUL, BEAUTIFUL, GORGEOUS CALL IT WHAT THE FUCK YOU WANT! It. Is. Perfect. Gah.
[5 Stars]
IMPACT - What mainly hit me about this piece is as said, that it is so bloody well-made, and that it simply is a fabulous ponysona. It's perfect, it fit your looks, it shows great similarities with yourself, and it simply... well.
Goodness gracious mio. And I thought I was stretching the limits for my ponysona design.
Though yours still looks beautiful and all of your ideas flow beautifully to create such a wonderful design, mine is just a mash up of different concepts that still needs rearranging.
Anyways, here we go.
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VISION - I like the entire idea. Showing the pony, the cutie mark, and as an added bonus, you've also thrown in the style of the magic, something which is really great when the pony has a custom kind of visual magic. All of it, displayed beautifully. I also like the addition of her name on top, and her nickname too, which I personally just simply love. It also fits.
[4,5 Stars]
ORIGINALITY - All I can poke on here, is the fact that the cutie mark has fire in it. I'm not sure, but that's the only thing I can see that MAY be a little unoriginal. Her name however, is lovable and neat, and her visual magic style is simply gorgeous. The pony itself is beyond... pretty much any ponysona I've ever seen before.
In short:
ITS GOT LOOKS, FEATURES, DETAILS, AND BACKSTORY AND IT'S SO FUCKING GOOD IT SUCKS.
The entire pony is original, with its mane twirling around the horn, small and neat details, practically addicting eyes, great and compelling personality, gorgeous mane, tail, and great colours.
[5 Stars] (God dammit you deserve it)
TECHNIQUE - ...
>_>
<_<
...What?
THERE'S NOTHING TO CRITICISE ABOUT THE TECHNIQUE.
IT LOOKS AMAZING, WONDERFUL, BEAUTIFUL, GORGEOUS CALL IT WHAT THE FUCK YOU WANT!
It. Is. Perfect.
Gah.
[5 Stars]
IMPACT - What mainly hit me about this piece is as said, that it is so bloody well-made, and that it simply is a fabulous ponysona. It's perfect, it fit your looks, it shows great similarities with yourself, and it simply... well.
[4,5 Stars]
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